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Morning Dew

Posted by Editor on 
the sun, broken down
            into particles and rays
sparkling through the morning dew
on my windshield before I slip

into another work day

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  1. Dagenn's avatar Dagenn says:
    February 11, 2013 at 9:27 am

    I like it. It reads with the disjointed perception of waking up. 🙂 keep writing!

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    1. Editor's avatar Adrian W. Lilly says:
      February 11, 2013 at 9:46 am

      Thanks for the feedback. I popped by your blog as well and really enjoyed your writing.

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      1. Dagenn's avatar Dagenn says:
        February 11, 2013 at 9:48 am

        It was an honest sentiment, and I enjoyed yours as well. Thanks for visiting! 🙂

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